Wednesday 25 April 2012

Changes

zindigi bewafa nahi logg bewafai karjate hain.. 


duniya wale hame bewakoof soch kar kuch bhi kahajate hain.. 


yaar bichar jaye usko rab ki marzi batate hain.. 


yaar apne ko khuda nahi time pass aajkal bulate hain.. 


zindigi ke badale hue matlab hame logg samzhate hain..
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  1. Jateen Trivedi (TJ)26 April 2012 at 05:13

    Loggo ki iss gufutagu mai tum apne app ko na kho jana,

    kabhi kisi tanha lamhe mai khud ko na bhul jana.

    Yaad hamesha unki aati hai jo dard chod jaate hain,

    harr dard goth kar pee janewale he kaamyaabi pate hai.

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    1. Sunny Panesar27 April 2012 at 01:02

      bravo!

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    2. Jateen Trivedi (TJ)27 April 2012 at 10:47

      Thank ku thank ku... tumhara wala "chances" padhte padhte, mujh se ek new ban gaya.. thoda help na to make a topic for mine... i wana blog it down but am not getting a good topic for it..

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    3. Sunny Panesar4 May 2012 at 10:22

      i write without deciding the topic after penning it down i chose the topic which suits it.. kindly different approach

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    4. Jateen Trivedi (TJ)7 May 2012 at 21:26

      Same here, but as this tym my words got penned down after reading your poem "changes", I somehow am not able to decide on a topic.. :(
      some suggestions please mate...

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    5. Sunny Panesar8 May 2012 at 02:57

      Slices of life, switch, turn

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    6. Jateen Trivedi (TJ)9 May 2012 at 09:56

      "The RIGHT turn" how does this sound???

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    7. Sunny Panesar9 May 2012 at 09:58

      pretty gud

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    8. Jateen Trivedi (TJ)11 May 2012 at 21:43

      Blogged it up.. (: :)

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